LOVIATHAN
by Mike Cavallaro
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Posted by: Tim Hamilton
08:48am / Apr 23, 2008
Some great story telling with the face at the top.
Is that the Q train?
Posted by: Simon Fraser
08:57am / Apr 23, 2008
Awesome bit of Inking there
Posted by: Chris
10:00am / Apr 23, 2008
I totally concur with Simon on the inking. I love the use of the "speed lines" [don't know if they qualify as speed lines] to convey the velocity of the approaching subway train.

Though you did forget to include a "BWA" with your "ha ha"s.
Posted by: Steve Fuentes
11:37am / Apr 23, 2008
Yeah, great inking on the approaching train. The way the train is inked, and the way the guy is inked, makes the train seem to move impossibly fast and the guy seem very still. That helps a lot to build up the tension that the train is about to hit him. Very Cool.
Posted by: Andrew Dimitt
11:44am / Apr 23, 2008
This kicks a lot of ass Mike!:D
Posted by: Kevin Colden
12:43pm / Apr 23, 2008
Thirds on the inking. The front of that train is sweet and speedy.
Posted by: jim d.
09:13pm / Apr 23, 2008
Holy crap! What's going to happen?!?!?
Posted by: Kiel West
12:46am / Apr 24, 2008
Shiny gauntlets! Beautiful work!
Posted by: Joe Infurnari
07:22pm / Apr 24, 2008
I'm going to chime in on this one, too. Brilliant! Nobody's made mention of the lettering on this so I want to give props to the SFX on the first three panels to make the hurtling train even more explicit.
The 'skull' face on the front of the train is a very nice and subtle touch as well. This is great stuff, Mike.
Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
11:23am / Apr 29, 2008
Tim,
I think it's a diverted C train.
Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
11:23am / Apr 29, 2008
Thanks Si.
I got lucky.
Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
11:24am / Apr 29, 2008
Chris,
Giffen & Dematteis have a copyright on "Bwa".
Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
11:25am / Apr 29, 2008
Thanks Steve. I like the contrast between the train and figure too. Not sure how that happened.
Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
11:25am / Apr 29, 2008
Thanks Andrew!
Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
11:26am / Apr 29, 2008
Kev,
Not is you're the guy standing on the tracks.
Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
11:27am / Apr 29, 2008
Jim,
Everyone dies on the next page.

No, just kidding.
Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
11:29am / Apr 29, 2008
Kiel,
I'll pass that along to my gauntlet shiner.

Wait, that came out wrong...
Posted by: Mike Cavallaro
11:30am / Apr 29, 2008
Mr. Infurnari,
Thanks for noticing the "death face" on the train! Finally!
Posted by: Umberto Torricelli
03:24am / Apr 30, 2008
brilliant!
great work!
Posted by: Llyn Hunter
01:11pm / May 14, 2008
Great speed lines! I really feel the motion on the train.